2010年1月27日星期三
Peer correction 1
1.I asked my grandfather about what were these objects and why did he still keep this box in well seal.
2. My grandfather said that these objects had a great meaning to him because they remind him of his adventures when he was young.
3. 600 years ago, there was an empire of ancient China in Ming Dynasty who's name is Lun Luo had a rock stamp with his name on it.
4. At first, she didn't know where her had family gone, but on the other side of the huge old-fashioned TV set, she saw a light go through the room.
5. Why do people have dreams when they are sleeping? I had this question when I was young. I asked my grandfather about it and he told me that people get dreams because mind just can’t be blank.
6. A mother and father thought that they need to have a break, so they decided to hand out for a night on the town. But they were worried about their sons, so they called their most reliable babysitter to take care of them. When the baby-sitter arrived, the three children had already fallen asleep, so the babysitter just stay in the room and sit around the children.
2. My grandfather said that these objects had a great meaning to him because they remind him of his adventures when he was young.
3. 600 years ago, there was an empire of ancient China in Ming Dynasty who's name is Lun Luo had a rock stamp with his name on it.
4. At first, she didn't know where her had family gone, but on the other side of the huge old-fashioned TV set, she saw a light go through the room.
5. Why do people have dreams when they are sleeping? I had this question when I was young. I asked my grandfather about it and he told me that people get dreams because mind just can’t be blank.
6. A mother and father thought that they need to have a break, so they decided to hand out for a night on the town. But they were worried about their sons, so they called their most reliable babysitter to take care of them. When the baby-sitter arrived, the three children had already fallen asleep, so the babysitter just stay in the room and sit around the children.
2010年1月20日星期三
The Exploration of Ancient Tombs
According to the archaeologist, they explored two tombs which has almost hundreds of years history, these two tombs connected to each other and has some funerary objections in it. Such as chesnuts,leather made purse,stamp, coins from Singapore and so on. Preliminary forecasting, these tombs belongs to a couple who lived nearly 150 years ago.
After probing aeeply into the tomb, the archaeologist found there is an old book which had record the story about the owner of these tombs. Aisha one of the owner of the tombs, who has a dream which is to travel all over the world since she was very young. One day, she left her family and her country with her little canoe and a 150 years old Poland blanket which was left by her grandma who was came from Poland. After a long term sailing, she first arrived at a small town in China. She felt so excited for seeing the traditional Chinese things so she decided to live there for a while. People are friendly and warm hearted there, they helped her learning cooking Chinese food, planting Chinese chestnut, speaking Chinese and she even get a stamp with a Chinese name on it. Time goes fast and six months has passed. She had to leave the lovely place and start her journey again.
The flow took Aisha’s canoe to another country which is called Singapore, she used her beautiful Poland blanket to change for the Singapore coins and she put the coins in her yellow leather purse. She heard from the other people that there was a very famous band from Chili came to Singapore and they would have a show at the biggest theater, so she went to the show with her yellow leather purse. There is an unexpected large number of people there and Aisha lost her purse in the crowd. She was worried and looking for it all the way back to the theater. At that time, a guy called her and asked if she lost anything with the yellow leather purse in his hand. She was so happy and invited him to dinner. During the dinner, she got to know that his name is Dick and he is Chileans. He is also the drummer in the band, their band would went back to their country in three days. He asked if she wants to go travel in Chili. They dated for the next three days and Aisha finally decided to go back to Chili with him. They quickly fell in love and Dick sent her a ceramic cup which has over thousands of years history in order to memory their love.
After going back to Chili, they get married and bought a farmhouse which was surrounded by the field. Aisha taught Dick about how to plant the chestnut that she bring from China and Dick taught she to play the drum. Because Aisha always uses the wrong gesture to hold the drum stick, Dick used a ruler to bond on her figure to help her. Several years later, they got a baby and they made a plaster model to memorize the new life in their family. The three family members lived with a happiness life and they keep travelling around the world to accomplish Aisha’s dream.
There are still many explorers there at the tomb's and more information about it will be shown later.
After probing aeeply into the tomb, the archaeologist found there is an old book which had record the story about the owner of these tombs. Aisha one of the owner of the tombs, who has a dream which is to travel all over the world since she was very young. One day, she left her family and her country with her little canoe and a 150 years old Poland blanket which was left by her grandma who was came from Poland. After a long term sailing, she first arrived at a small town in China. She felt so excited for seeing the traditional Chinese things so she decided to live there for a while. People are friendly and warm hearted there, they helped her learning cooking Chinese food, planting Chinese chestnut, speaking Chinese and she even get a stamp with a Chinese name on it. Time goes fast and six months has passed. She had to leave the lovely place and start her journey again.
The flow took Aisha’s canoe to another country which is called Singapore, she used her beautiful Poland blanket to change for the Singapore coins and she put the coins in her yellow leather purse. She heard from the other people that there was a very famous band from Chili came to Singapore and they would have a show at the biggest theater, so she went to the show with her yellow leather purse. There is an unexpected large number of people there and Aisha lost her purse in the crowd. She was worried and looking for it all the way back to the theater. At that time, a guy called her and asked if she lost anything with the yellow leather purse in his hand. She was so happy and invited him to dinner. During the dinner, she got to know that his name is Dick and he is Chileans. He is also the drummer in the band, their band would went back to their country in three days. He asked if she wants to go travel in Chili. They dated for the next three days and Aisha finally decided to go back to Chili with him. They quickly fell in love and Dick sent her a ceramic cup which has over thousands of years history in order to memory their love.
After going back to Chili, they get married and bought a farmhouse which was surrounded by the field. Aisha taught Dick about how to plant the chestnut that she bring from China and Dick taught she to play the drum. Because Aisha always uses the wrong gesture to hold the drum stick, Dick used a ruler to bond on her figure to help her. Several years later, they got a baby and they made a plaster model to memorize the new life in their family. The three family members lived with a happiness life and they keep travelling around the world to accomplish Aisha’s dream.
There are still many explorers there at the tomb's and more information about it will be shown later.
2010年1月13日星期三
The Love Story
Once upon a time, there was an African girl whose name is Aisha. She had a dream which was to travel all over the world since she was very young. One day, she left her family and her country with her little canoe and a 150 years old Poland blanket which was left by her grandma who was came from Poland. After a long term sailing, she first arrived at a small town in China. She felt so excited for seeing the traditional Chinese things so she decided to live there for a while. People were friendly and warm hearted there, they helped her learning cooking Chinese food, planting Chinese chestnut, speaking Chinese and she even get a stamp with a Chinese name on it. Time goes fast and six months has passed. She had to leave the lovely place and started her journey again.
The flow took Aisha’s canoe to another country which is called Singapore, she used her beautiful Poland blanket to change for the Singapore coins and she put the coins in her yellow leather purse. She heard from the other people that there was a very famous band from Chili came to Singapore and they would have a show at the biggest theater, so she went to the show with her yellow leather purse. There was an unexpected large number of people there and Aisha lost her purse in the crowd. She was worried and looking for it all the way back to the theater. At that time, a guy called her and asked if she lost anything with the yellow leather purse in his hand. She was so happy and invited him to dinner. During the dinner, she got to know that his name was Dick and he was Chileans. He was also the drummer in the band, their band would went back to their country in three days. He asked if she wants to go travel in Chili. They dated for the next three days and Aisha finally decided to go back to Chili with him. They quickly fell in love and Dick sent her ceramic cup which has over thousands of years history in order to memory their love.
After going back to Chili, they got married and bought a farmhouse which was surrounded by the field. Aisha taught Dick about how to plant the chestnut that she brought from China and Dick taught she to play the drum. Because Aisha always uses the wrong gesture to hold the drum stick, Dick used a ruler to bond on her figure to help her. Several years later, they got a baby and they made a plaster model to memorize the new life in their family. The three family members lived with a happiness life and they keep travelling around the world to accomplish Aisha’s dream.
The flow took Aisha’s canoe to another country which is called Singapore, she used her beautiful Poland blanket to change for the Singapore coins and she put the coins in her yellow leather purse. She heard from the other people that there was a very famous band from Chili came to Singapore and they would have a show at the biggest theater, so she went to the show with her yellow leather purse. There was an unexpected large number of people there and Aisha lost her purse in the crowd. She was worried and looking for it all the way back to the theater. At that time, a guy called her and asked if she lost anything with the yellow leather purse in his hand. She was so happy and invited him to dinner. During the dinner, she got to know that his name was Dick and he was Chileans. He was also the drummer in the band, their band would went back to their country in three days. He asked if she wants to go travel in Chili. They dated for the next three days and Aisha finally decided to go back to Chili with him. They quickly fell in love and Dick sent her ceramic cup which has over thousands of years history in order to memory their love.
After going back to Chili, they got married and bought a farmhouse which was surrounded by the field. Aisha taught Dick about how to plant the chestnut that she brought from China and Dick taught she to play the drum. Because Aisha always uses the wrong gesture to hold the drum stick, Dick used a ruler to bond on her figure to help her. Several years later, they got a baby and they made a plaster model to memorize the new life in their family. The three family members lived with a happiness life and they keep travelling around the world to accomplish Aisha’s dream.
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