2010年1月27日星期三

Peer correction 1

1.I asked my grandfather about what were these objects and why did he still keep this box in well seal.
2. My grandfather said that these objects had a great meaning to him because they remind him of his adventures when he was young.
3. 600 years ago, there was an empire of ancient China in Ming Dynasty who's name is Lun Luo had a rock stamp with his name on it.
4. At first, she didn't know where her had family gone, but on the other side of the huge old-fashioned TV set, she saw a light go through the room.
5. Why do people have dreams when they are sleeping? I had this question when I was young. I asked my grandfather about it and he told me that people get dreams because mind just can’t be blank.
6. A mother and father thought that they need to have a break, so they decided to hand out for a night on the town. But they were worried about their sons, so they called their most reliable babysitter to take care of them. When the baby-sitter arrived, the three children had already fallen asleep, so the babysitter just stay in the room and sit around the children.

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